CONCISE NEWS STORY ARTICLE (INDIVIDU)

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Title

In the headline of the news that I researched, this news was about the dangers of drugs for students, especially in their teenage years


Opening Paragraph

Adolescence is a phase of a person's development from childhood to adulthood. Therefore, if children and adolescents are damaged by drugs, then their future is bleak or even destroyed.


Body Paragraph

Drug is medicine, material and non-food substance that when drunk, smoked, inhaled, swallowed or injected affect the workings of the brain and often cause dependence. As a result, the workings of the brain are altered.

The largest number of drug users is the teenage age group. During adolescence, the desire to experiment, follow trends and lifestyles, and have fun is very high. Although all these tendencies are natural, they can also make it easier for teenagers to be driven to abuse drugs. 

The problem becomes even more serious if, due to drug use, teenagers contract and transmit HIV/AIDS among teenagers. This has been proven by the use of drugs through alternating needles. The nation will lose many teenagers due to drug abuse and the spread of HIV/AIDS.


Solution

The solution to avoid drug abuse for students is to get closer to God Almighty, do positive activities and hang out with people who bring positive things.


Summary

Using drugs has a lot of bad effects on health. In addition to the physical impact, drugs also have an impact on the psychology of someone who consumes drugs. The symptoms are often thinking abnormally, feeling anxious, the body needs a certain amount to cause the desired effect, dependence / always needing drugs.

Comments

  1. Hi, friend ! I'm nhoy. My additional criticism is Should have added Vocabulary to make it more understandable. Overall it is very good because it explains dangers of drugs for students, From the opening to the summary, it is quite understandable.

    Overall Rating: My overall rating would be about 8,5 out of 10.

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